Thursday, December 31, 2009

Sunbed Goggles Eye Closed

Fanfic

After today I have read several fanfictions that are urgently improved, here my opinion on what is not at all in fanfictions.

first Too many spelling errors
I really wonder some people, if that ever stopped anyone who said that now almost every word processor has an automatic spell checker. Of course, it also happens sometimes that one mistake, but at some point it's just too much.

second Wrong "Terms"

I mean specifically that someone writes a fanfic about a certain topic and then the corresponding terms from the fans false writing or completely incorrect use.
spelling mistakes are just annoying, but completely false ideas usually lead to comprehension problems. The spiritual pressure of Bleach is not "Reiraku" but "Reiatsu. But if the former stands there, then sometimes the whole sentence incomprehensible.
course there are terms which are not quite unique, such as the spelling of names Pains in Naruto. Whether this is really from the English word, you can now times (as far as I know) say, so I do not see it so close.
basic rule: anyone who is not safe if you look previously ! Here to help Google and Wikipedia and Naruto also Narutopedia .

third Half or "broken" sentences
With my broken I here that are either missing words or to second by the sentence does not understand. It annoys the amazing reading, if you read a sentence twice in order to understand it at all. The
can handle easily, simply by again just reads the words written about or be a beta reader investigated.

4th Colloquial language, where it does not belong
In direct speech, etc. I have absolutely nothing against it, but if you write in a part of the FIC as narrator, one should also use written language. Reads and sounds better in improving ways.

5th Present instead of past
As they say usually only things that have happened, to use for stories of the past. Of course, not for direct speech, etc., but for everything you write as narrator.

6th Too many short sentences

This is my opinion after reading just too choppy and disturbs so that the flow of reading. Of course I realize that this may well be a stylistic device, but it still bothers

7th Plate Chatraktere
For a story will be most interesting if the characters have depth . Therefore, I find it terrible when the action is simply told without explaining why the person does something. Nobody's just something wrong, but the people have a reason for their actions . (Maybe out of psychopaths who are mentally impaired.) The best example is Gaara from Naruto, who only wants to kill them all because him want to kill everyone and then his fight with Naruto realizes that he is not alone and come to their senses.

8th cause rapid sequence of actions
between the individual events must sometimes a break . In real life happens not through something eventually, so it is important to act in accordance with expand. Except, of course, has one little story from the start, that's something different. ^ - ^
(for example well-developed plot : balance example little action : 13)

9th Framed Japanese
If you can not the language, you have to ask or google it. But what I had read there already for things in Japanese, would in part have been really easy to fix. This is in the wrong order no as well as the incorrect use of adjectives.

now before someone is upset and thinks that I should not do such a know-all and would have no idea, I want to stress again that this is my opinion . Also, I have determined in my previous life as the 1000 books to read Deshalb und weiß, wie man eine Geschichte aufbauen muss für Fehler und was man nicht machen sollte und ich studiere Japanologie.

Friday, December 18, 2009

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Short Reviews II (movies)

belongings in recent weeks - for my circumstances - quite a lot of movies watched. On the one hand again any part of the SAW series and containing the new part, SAW VI and then I finally overcome me and me the three Resident Evil films done.

SAW I is so labeled by many as by far the best or even like to be the only good Saw film, the best of it anyway, but by far? He is damn good, that is clear, but grad loses the end, as in all parts of this series or general films with Game Changer at the end rather at Impact. Nevertheless, a great start of a new horror series.
4.5 / 5

SAW II is from the beginning raised differently than the first part, but that is purely managed by the plot ago imo. Unfortunately weaken the characters (in the house) a little bit. Therefore, this part contains the syringe pit the sickest event for me, but when that was not enough to run the whole thing with me even worse. Anyway it notes the importance of Amanda for the SAW series is and how awesome is Jigsaw.
4 / 5

SAW III - appear for the first time that the conscience traps. The main "victim" must decide in this case are whether another person should live or die. This kind of case I find rather boring, probably because the other people I would not care [about this: The Button (The Box spoof) ]. This is the back story quite nice and Amanda gets more depth. Furthermore, another important character is introduced. Nevertheless, imo, the first low point of the SAW series.
2.5 / 5

SAW IV - We meet two old friends again - rig which is placed by Jigsaw to promote to various people in Jigsaw traps so he can reach Eric Matthews. From that part is quite complicated in the series, but this is a fairly good twist and a hammer final. Furthermore, it is so successful the "second trilogy" and started a new cycle, for SAW IV to know the reason, many parallels to the first part.
4 / 5

SAW V - This time again have several people work together to escape from the traps (again parallel to the second part of the "first trilogy). One such person is the wonderful Julie Benz. Otherwise the story is more in focus so we get to Jigsaw's ex-wife Jill to know and learn more about Hoffman. Incidentally, the last scene is imo one of the best ends of the series.
3.5 / 5

SAW VI - The end of the second Trilogy thus conscience are once again falling on the plan, as I said I do not like them. However, they are better than their predecessors from SAW III. Otherwise, again expanded the story and we learn even more about Jill and Hoffman. There are (at least not within the SAW series within the movie), a right stuck surprising end and a reunion with Bear Trap in the case of Amanda in SAW I. Basically a good introduction to SAW VII, which is to bear the name and Endgame [again] to be the last part of the saga of Jigsaw. can if you are into the series they certainly pack on it anywhere, 0.5 points:
3 / 5

SAW conclusion. As for me when second run of the series has inspired especially the inner logic and the like end of the second trilogy, which is itself a bit more tributes. Basically reach into every part of more and more Sprockets logically into one another. I am fascinated by the series and they believe that the best horror series that did so far and am looking forward to any further part.



Resident Evil - Well with a few names / Licker name and the film actually has nothing to do with little Resident Evil. Here, the Licker is animated in the rest terrible. Otherwise, no voltage produced, still tells a good story and it just does not end satisfactorily. The film could also be called virus-XY. Well at least with Milla Jovovich a great dress.
fifth

Residen Evil: Apocalypse - Significantly higher Resi-feeling, but also generally much more entertaining. Jill Valentine and Nemesis was pretty good reception is great. There is also much more action than the first part, but also partly to excessive action scenes, but this is due to strange forces. Nevertheless, one would have the whole thing a bit less partying can. Overall a very entertaining movie which you look at quite can.
3 / 5

Resident Evil: Extinction - desert setting, birds, miscast and a terrible haircut to my mind spontaneously when I think back. The Resi-feeling is screwed down again for basically as in the first part only have names and have nothing to do with zombies Resident Evil. Even though I like them, but Ali Larter as Claire Redfield is an absolute wrong choice. Milla looks terrible and the plot is fairly unimportant to scarce.
1.5 / 5

Resident Evil-The Bottom Line: The second one can look at .. even as a Resident Evil fan, the other two are more of an insult to the name. What I really find the lack of reference to the games notice is negative, the very bumpy transition from film to film. They seem as if you had really no idea yet what happens in the next part.

Wednesday, November 25, 2009

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Kyuumin ~ ~ Oyasumi lyrics

kyuumin ~ ~ oyasumi
lyrics:
music Yuuki: Yuuki / sho

hi o otoshita gogo sanji sugi
mado no soto wa nari yamanai semi no koe Kono
nanimonai Shiroi Heya no kuuhaku de
side wa itsukara yoko no natto ita no Darou

ubawareta Academy no Hidari and no kankaku wa
azayaka even though ASU on irodorou to tomarazu
tenohira kara no oto o tatete suna wa Naze koboreru
ikiteiru no?
sonna koto wa Wakaranai may have ...

yagate hi wa nagare kasumiiro tooki
somaru of what's hi modorenai

wasureta "sou" yo Naze
niramu of foxes or no?
kanadeta senritsu
sae yume no ato mou todokanai

kotori been no hane yo Naze of madobe of
soredemo nao tobouto suru no wa Naze? Oshiete yo


sukoshidake mou mou yume no sukoshidake
tsusuki committees itaiyo
big part dakara ima wa semete "coy" no koe by yudanete

kumoma Hikari no sasu

mukugawa de blushing wa imasu waraete irudarouka
todoite "cone"

koe ga yume no sukoshidake
sukoshidake tsusuki committees itaiyo
semete dakara ima wa big part of "timidity" no koe ni yudanete
ima egaode “oyasumi” o...

Saturday, August 8, 2009

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Collection Overview

Since I still look relatively many series, here is a summary. They are, moreover, only the series which I've also seen complete or where I'm at least on the current state and therefore if they have views completely phased out.



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Top 5 - Crazy Women in TV

  1. Cassie (Skins)
  2. Rose (Two & A Half Men)
  3. Elliot (Scrubs)
  4. Linda (Becker)
  5. Phoebe (Friends)
Cassie is by far the first For it is not just popped right. It is also one of the best series ever characters. I only say: "Wow! ! Lovely "

/ / the" text "must be extended in time - but am too lazy to write more grad

Friday, August 7, 2009

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Saturday, July 18, 2009

Wrist Band Colour Meanings

Prinz Pi - Berlin Big Love

Berlin
love of my life Swear In Berlin, the people in court on a hollow Bible
Berlin, you are unique - sometimes good sometimes bad
And always there when no one expects you

This is for friends who are in heaven, I come soon after
I am telling you every night, half asleep The
is for the people who think the are
silk outside, yet remarkably remains pure in heart like a child
This is for people who are in prison, where the walls are gray
So they think they are almost blind
The chilln in prison at her window
As the real hero has become a cheesy gangster film
The people that just parents who exert
because they want their kids inherit a better world
This is R & D r the kids from my yard
This is for the mother in me, she pulls her son alone is the size
for the good cops, there are far too little of it
But if I were to complain, that would be here an eternal song
This is the neighborhood I'm Prince
Pi of Berlin and broadcast live from my Berlin City Palace

my great love
In Berlin Swear people to justice a hollow Bible
Berlin you're unique - good times bad times
And always there when no one expects you

This is for the road teams are hot because they get dressed
our stickers, glue on the streets of Berlin
Here blows a cold wind, so the collar above
husteln every day because we have to pay off the days
If you're not from here, you can not feel the shit
It's like when people here shit and not wash
And while many try to imitate the rich
Berliner Kindl dependent children is different than the beer
As Becks-Gold, that's piss for us
We are a German master in this art dissenden
And besides curry sausage and football there are many more
Prenzelberg means small Swabia, so many move here

Berlin
love of my life Swear In Berlin, the people in court on a hollow Bible
Berlin you are unique - Good times bad times
And always there when no one expects you

I lean back pulling on my cigarette
I was talking on the street again since I rap
I output, let out what has to go
And the scene feels like putting on shit slips
The moment when you realize what has happened
One can not help it, but figured the brain it
A moment of freezing, comically
Before on lying the ground screaming "What a shit!"
Anyway, I'm still the same
no faster and no coupons Keller
with corpses can no plates are sufficient for the hunger in me
With every breath I feel like the lungs exhale air pulsates
my city, I smell their fragrance
the smell of asphalt and perfume from the brothel
from cars and sweat, subway stations and parks
This is not the center of the world but not her ass

Berlin my great love
Swear In Berlin, the people in court on a hollow Bible
Berlin you are unique - good times bad times
And always there when you expect no

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Short Reviews I (Music)

It was surprising But in 2009 come out yet but so good albums.

will start with KIZ with sexism against law. The album need to fire more than cock fight, but then really. Again there are several great lines of text and Beattechisch is also brilliant.
5 / 5

Another topalbums is Klagopsalmer of Shining. Amazing that it's ever come out yet - was, after all, for over a year moved again and again that it is still the same sooo good then I would not have thought genuine. The best song is "only" a cover, but it can ignore it, but can also be heard the rest of the album.
5 / 5

Then There Were lately also a couple of fairly trivial Well albums. As an example, there would be Billy Talent, which represents by far the worst work of Canadians. I'm not against slower albums, but that was a handle in the toilet. (2 / 5) Then there came out Arkaeas debut Years In The Darkness .. I do not know what to make of it musically, the album is great, but the singer is not at all .. in some Songs imitating Burton C. Bell, which, given the fact that half of the songs originally written for Fear Factory was not too far-fetched, but unfortunately he is not ran to matching the class of Bell. In the other songs he sounds like Chester from Linkin Park and is not the .. ( 2.5 / 5 )

Monday, July 13, 2009

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Personality Test

Ta-dah, your personality type is ENTP!

extraverted (E) 57% Introverted (I) 43%
Intuitive (N) 59% Sensing (S)
41% Thinking (T) 55% Feeling (F) 45%
Perceiving (P) 68% Judging (J) 32%

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Sunday, July 12, 2009

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King of sitcoms .. NOT!

"this series is certainly not rankommen on King of Queens, which is simply the non plus ultra of the genre" Somehow I could

the hype koq never understand, it's not a bad sitcom - If none, but even among the bold-type-with-much-too-pretty-woman sitcoms nothing better as According to Jim and Still Standing. Everything I can think of now either, but I find both better. Although one can argue with Still Standing, maybe I'm a little too dazzled by Renee Olstead. Anyway: The problem with koq lies in the characters and their relationships to each other.
Carrie example is a totally unsympathetic Kackbratze and offers little potential for good jokes, unless it upsets someone together, but that's it. Cherly of ATJ is certainly not a character of a Gagfeuerwerk guaranteed, but it is not so bitchig after all, but quite nice and just a great Vollzeitmami. Doug and Jim do not take much, said Jim somewhat wacky is just think of the Green Man In koq but it has finally Arthur more or less acts as a child and really the highlight of the series. The minor characters are not worth mentioning. In ATJ, there is still a lot of good main characters. It starts with Dana, which is one of the funniest female characters in a sitcom and not only that it is even a regularly brings the good and funny sayings. Furthermore, one has to Ruby & Gracy two of the funniest children of a sitcom, which began in the first season with pure innocence and has been partially offset by too great piggishness Andy developed. Overall, the family participates in According to Jim much intact and more realistic than in King of Queens. There seems everything makes sense only for the purpose of gags to be. Neither Carrie nor Doug Arthur and Carrie can suffer, we shall have at least often feel not even Doug. I have it not to over-subscribed, family relations - did not even work for Married with Children also wonderful - but that is somehow neither one thing nor. King of Queens is for me in the same category as Mario Barth and the Simpsons. Laugh my brains out. Sad that all of them by many as Non Plus Ultra are seeing in their area.

Back to sitcoms in general. There are far above the "subgenres" quite a few sitcoms that are superior to King of Queen. Scrubs, Two & a Half Men, The Big Bang Theory and How I Met Your Mother for example, only by four recent examples mentioned.

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Somehow I know at the time not know what to broadcast standard. In the queue are currently Heroes, Life, Roseanne and The Hughleys aka among single neighbor. Heroes I just want to see to have seen around the times. Life reads the story of her nice, let's see obs is good and Roseanne will I just completely and look in the right order. Guck probably ego but not always, and if the hard drive space is coming to the end, it flies back down. A fate which has already seen several old-school sitcoms with me. The Hughleys I will soon see forever complete, unfortunately I have so far only the first two seasons.
can bring myself to watch one of the series but I am not so far. Instead, I'll grad a Gilmore Girls rerun, which is in view of the fact that I have the series in recent weeks for the first time ever seen completely, sort of strange.

movies I can sometimes work off again. Watchmen, Dark Knight, 9 to 5 - Days in Porn, Lesbian Vampire Killers and Scrubs - A XXX Parody want to be seen and those are just the ones eh schon rumliegen.
Watchmen & Dark Knight sind einfach total must-sees. Irgendwie merkwürdig dass ich DK noch immer nicht gesehen hab, hab mich damals total drauf gefreut. Mir ging dann aber der Hype so aufn Sack dass ich ihn bisher gemieden hab. Zu Watchmen sag ich nur Rorschach!
Tja und dann die Porn & Trash Abteilung. Bei 9 to 5 bin ich ja mal gespannt ob es  wirklich interessant ist oder nur eine langweilige 0815 Porndoku. Lesbian Vampire Killers. Ich hab außer dem offensichtlichem keine Ahnung worums geht. Ich fand den Titel überzeugend genug. Abwarten ob der film was kann. Den Scrubs Porn brauch ich eigentlich nicht sehen, da ich das Script schon vor Ewigkeiten gelesen hab und It can even be pretty good - so for a porno - I am actually in action against porn, but at times Scrubs can make an exception. Well the rest is no matter. Not to mention that the actors are almost all occupied inappropriate. Especially the blending Elliot is an insult to the great Sarah Chalke.

Now I will definitely be the first two episodes of The Big Bang Theory look ..

Sunday, July 5, 2009

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Lost Series Guide

Have written before "forever" just a text on the Lost series guide, but as I review the section on the strange boxes never have finished writing (wanted to scan in two examples, but was always too lazy to do), the text is so far left lying on my hard drive. So I throw him in here, so the work is not entirely in vain.





01 02 03





Did the issue now for well over a week ago and am ready also with reading, so I go through it a try.

The Cover:

/ / I am referring to my version (center) and knew at the time that it is not in any case, several versions are

It is generally quite successful. take on the basis of the German state a promo picture from Season 4 is okay and certainly true. However, I find the red / orange a bit too harsh and inappropriate for Lost. No idea if this is for each of those issues that, or whether I have the special-edition-ugly, but as it previously circulated on the net I would have found it much better.
Oh and what is this Dharmalogozusammenstellung down there? I mean what are the Sri Lanka & Psychology logo which had never been seen in the series to look there? Instead, they had the Orchid, Looking Glass can take or Tempest logo. Oh and the Staff logo can be seen not, looks like the inverted main logo.

Introduction:
The card is a joke that the flight path would be wrong even someone noticed Lost without knowledge.
The lyrics to Lost as a series is okay, but that is nowhere mentioned Cuse and JJ on the other hand even gets an extra text is a bit strange.
btw: What you are thinking to tackle the enterprise as an image for that I will prefer not to question first. Clearly it is the latest project from JJ is totally unsuitable.

Darsteller-/Charakterübersicht:
-itself I did not grumble too much. They are all relatively well written and contain all important to the actors. What bothers me but the fact that Locke has received only one page (Jack, Kate and Sawyer have 3) and comes after Sayid. Oh and the Freight agent have failed to occur. Otherwise quite solid.

Episode Guide:
I find the assessment criteria (important series, Suspense & Mystery) chosen to be very bad. Especially since I sometimes so happens as if it does not matter how many points each player has on the overall impression that has no influence there.

/ / paragraph on assessment

The summaries of the episodes are usually wrong, but they have now and then small errors in how people exchanged.
But if the criteria is an entirely ignores the useful guide. Oh yes on nearly every page has some nice Triva-Facts are mentioned.

Overall impression:
The booklet is for beginners who want to see any episode a second time very helpful and certainly practical. Furthermore, it has a lot of really good pictures and nice Triviafakten, but for Lostgeeks it is imo a waste of money because it offers nothing new. is located exactly at, but the sticking point at a cost of 10Euro be assumed that there tend to buy Lost freaks - a new entrant will pay something for such a little price. It is better to first
rumlesen 10min in it and then decide whether it is worth the money.





Where can I read it again now .. it may very well be that it was reads, in part, but very stupid, which is because each paragraph I have rewritten a thousand times and it sounds a whole lot of negative.

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APOCALYPSE

After many years I had no real blog more - are excluded Myspace, guest contributions and Suffblogs - again a new man. Let's see if I write regularly, I have not come sehs yes. However, lately I feel more and more the urge to write something down. Therefore, let's see. Maybe will work out after all. Topics are probably limited to music and series .. one probably even more games & movies. But private think not. Are enough people that their boring life on the internet expatiate ..